I recieved my preliminary task back with feedback from my teacher.
The feedback I received was as follows
- Mast head needs to be more separate.
- Keep the boxed images throughout.
- Cineworld coupon looks like a caption.
- No continuity with contents and cover.
- Different Mast head on contents page.
- Different Borders used on contents page.
- Different Font on contents page.
This feedback helped me realise the importance of a house style and the continuity throughout a magazine. I have considered what I would have done differently and I feel i would have corrected all of the above. I would keep the same colour scheme as it is the St.Marks Colours and I believe it fits. I like the images and I would not have done any different editing to them.
- Different Font on contents page.
This feedback helped me realise the importance of a house style and the continuity throughout a magazine. I have considered what I would have done differently and I feel i would have corrected all of the above. I would keep the same colour scheme as it is the St.Marks Colours and I believe it fits. I like the images and I would not have done any different editing to them.
My contents page looked good when i was designing it however again after studying it all the flaws started appearing. I would probably completely scrap this page and start again if I had to. I would make sure that the house style is kept from the front page. I would insure the logo and masthead were in the same places and also borders around the images. I am happy with the images and the content but completely rearrange the layout.
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